Wilhiemthe2nd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dream P2 Feat RealFaction]

This is pretty fantastic I tell you what.

RealFaction needs to work on his upper registers of course, something that can be improved with time. :)
Other than that, there is a bit of a mixing issue methinks. Rythem Guitar is a bit loud and over powering, Percussions don't have enough, Bass can be a bit Bassier, and I would apply Chorus to vocals in the middle (stopping at "Say goodbye to the past,
it was never meant to last.)

Actually the mixing issue might just be the Rythem guitar being too loud. :P

Great song!~ Loved it!~

Back-From-Purgatory responds:

Yeah, mixing issues are due mostly to the fact that the song was never designed for vocals, and I didn't edit the song to accommodate RealFactions vocals. If I did, I certainly would have made a few changes to let the vocals sit better in the song.

Funny story though, part of the reason the rhythm guitar is a bit over-powering is because I run a fairly bass heavy tone... And there's no bass in the song, aside from the bassy frequencies from the rhythm guitar... And I boosted the bass to give a little bit more punch to the music. I guess I boosted it a little bit too much. Live and learn.

Glad you like it though.

[unseeing]

Wish my Piano Stuff sounded this awesome.

Very very nice work here. Everything seemed to melt nicely in my ears~
:)
5 Stars
2 Enthusiastic Thumbs Up

Skcy3 responds:

I'll be sure first thing tomorrow, late here going to bed now, to give your stuff a listen and review. I'm a massive fan of the piano, it's by far my favorite instrument. I'm sure your stuff is very good. Thank you for taking the take to write a review, glad you enjoyed the song.

[Towards Destiny (Full)]

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*slow clap*

ET16 responds:

*Bows*

[Towards Destiny (Demo)]

Really like it! Sounds very cinematic, hard to believe this isn't in a movie. I cant wait to hear the full version for this.
If I were the one writing this, I would follow this with a Hans Zimmer-esque "Engage pure Awesome moment" ( See Inception's: Dream Is Collapsing ) That is, if you want this piece to be "Self Containing". ( Moonlight Sonata's first movement is sad yet calm, but its third is epic and intense. )

If this is just going to be an adventuring tune, then I would make this somewhat "loopable".

Still, VERY nice work here, I wouldn't be surprised if Hans Zimmer actually wrote it. :)

ET16 responds:

Haha Thank you very much :D

[Alone For Now]

Instrumentation a little off here, there are ways you can make having a bass and piano play well together, but this didn't really work to well.
The Bass isn't to engaging, but as an ambient song that is okay.

Unfortunately, its the Drums that kinda take away from this. The Drums seem to follow one monotonous pattern, and the Snare isn't punchy enough, its more poppy then anything.

Still, keep up with composing! The melody was rather nice, and you only recently got your Music Program, keep practicing! :)

[Just some more 8-bit]

Very Nice!
As part of my specific form of Autism, I'm able to handle those kinda high pitch sounds in your lead. As far as I can tell, the Issue is only very present in the beginning.
In your shoes, i would've put the first instrument at least one octave lower.

Nice work! I also wanted to work with 8-bit music, but I am not sure if that comes in VSTs or Soundfonts

Jahn33 responds:

I used nettracker, but it was so complex i pooped brix XD

[Mashing potatoes (Voice)]

Potatoes! Mash 'em Smash 'em Put 'em in a Stew!?

Voices are voice like.
Cant really say why exactly, but that female voice isnt so convincing though.

Jahn33 responds:

Cmonn brah don't hate on Micro Anne
Thank for the review ^_ ^though

[Epic Return (MAC13)]

( Ironically, I just submitted "Lost Faith" Where you DO suffer a major setback/just "won" the game )

Very nice and smooth, Im liking the horns, In fact, I really like everything. This is surely movie material.
Nice Job!

Warhector responds:

Thanka man :D

[It was]

I am in love with that guitar of yours. I myself play electric, and not very skilled at acoustic. The Piano can be a little out of place sometimes, but the real problem is the distortion hum that sometimes comes up. That'll hurt sensitive ears ^.^ . Not your humming of course, I find your humming pretty subtle and pretty.

Take better precautions with recording, and this would be much nicer.

(Also, your English is fine in the description, just captailize the T in This, the S in Scuse (( Thats slang, so its okay to use it )) and if you want to be picky, add another period after "ladies" to make it a proper elipsis. " ... " )

Really like it! Keep at it!

Jean-Raymond responds:

note for 2013: improving recording and periods after "ladies"... ^^

thanks

[For Grace]

The best of your content as of 1/3/13 i'd say. Good luck to you. :3
Only thing I would do is make that bass drum louder, and allow the end to fade out. (Unless you intended to be a Dream Theater and did that on purpose ((See "Pull Me Under")) *shot* )