Wilhiemthe2nd's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[D5M1_MUS R3M1X3D]

Phenomenal. The Bass Drum and Snare can be a little louder though.

[Warm]

Nice, the guitar synth can be better, but there is only so much you can do with synthetic guitars. haha.
However. 1-2-1-2-1-2-1-2-1-2-1-2 *snore* That drumline in the first half, and even in the 2nd half of the song yearns for variation. Those patterns are okay, and they work, but adding a snare hit or bass drum hit more often and in more creative ways would entertain your audience better. I'm not saying you have to have the drums be "awesome" everytime, but divert the energy of the song man! :)

Also, during that guitar solo, i noticed a distinct lack of bass. Even a minimal amount of bass, is better than no bass. There are genres without drums, but not one without bass. In rare occasions, you can get away with no bass. That solo is not one of them. Simply adding bass there probably would mean a half star up for this. :)

Keep at it man!

[Techno Symphony #1]

I had the strong urge to shoot something while listening to this song. Not because it was terrible, but because the song was telling me to do so. I can easily imagine picking up a blaster rifle and mowing dudes down and laugh in their faces.

But this has problems. To me, this song needs to construct additional strings. Notably the lack of chords. If you had a chord progression in there, even a quiet one, it would be a lot better, and probably have better flow and "Thickness".
Some of the melody is also a bit dissonant, but if on purpose, then good job.

njaddison responds:

Sorry, this was my first Electronic song. Using Anvil Studio was probably not the best idea, but I didn't know about Trackers then.

[Rainy Sunday]

Okay, you are MUCH better than I was when I first started out. Good Job!
But this needs some work. You do not have a melodic line. This is crucial to your song's uniqueness. This also makes the song sound thin. The Bassline does have a quasi-melodic vibe to it. (See Brody Quest) But it does not carry on well. It also does not conform to the Chords at all through this.

The Drumline is excellently done, but keep in mind the crash symbol should normally strike on the measure of a new idea. (Such as adding an instruement) That is the one thing i'd change with the Drumline.

Keep up the good work, you seem very promising.

[Some Kinda Song]

Very nice, that Violin riff is pretty catchy. The only thing you should look out for is Instrumentation. To me, the Violin is a little out of place, and should be replaced by a Guitar (High Octaves) or synth.